Loudpaw was jumping around happily. "I'm not really tired yet!!" "I can see that." Rushingpaw added. Speedpaw asked, "Why so hyper?" "I just really want to train tomorrow!!!" "I guess that makes sense.." Rushingpaw said. "Well, im going to sleep." She curled up and closed her eyes. Loudpaw stayed up and started to play with a leaf that was on the ground. Speedpaw enjoyed watching him try to "Kill" the leaf. They shared a couple of laughs, some were too loud, so they pretended to sleep if a warrior walked in. But once they left, the two went back to their game.
(Ha, Sorry.) Rushingpaw woke up to find his sister sleeping next to Loudpaw, with a ripped up leaf beside them. "Hmph." He walked out of the den quietly and grabbed a mouse to eat. He wondered what he was going to learn today.
-I know's it's awkward because on the Cats of hiddenclan page it says WaveKIT but it's for my story, so I think I'll just stay a warrior here and on my story just be a kit. So the story is completely different :)-
"Rushingpaw... GET OUT HERE NOW!" Waveclaw growled with dignity. Rushingpaw sighed and felt Mistpaw's eyes on him. He turned around and saw her staring at him. Uncomfortable, Rushingpaw quickly sprang out. Waveclaw was a fierce and impatient mentor, somewhat good for him, though. "Good Morning Waveclaw." he recited. He looked around. No other apprentice was up this early saying 'goody goody morning' to THEIR mentor. Waveclaw inspected him. "Go pick out the elders' fleas till sunhigh." She barked at him. "I'll inspect them, so don't dare skip one. Then meet me in the training hollow SHARP when the sun gets between those two trees." Waveclaw said, gesturing to the tall trees in the front of camp. "yes, Waveclaw." Rushingpaw said orderly, and ran off.
Rushingpaw ran to the elder's den and started to pick fleas. At sunhigh Waveclaw came in, as planned, and inspected. "Very good Rushingpaww, now we are going to the training hollow," Waveclaw said sternly. The elders stared after Rushinigpaw in sympathy, seeing that he was never getting a break. But they didn't say anything because they didn't want to get Waveclaw angry.
-Oceanmist (is this ok, srry this is my first post and I dont know that much about hiddenclan yet)
-Oh yeah, thats fine :) - Loudpaw watched Rushingpaw get so hardly worked. He sighed and took another bite of his vole until Dragonwing came over. "Hi, Dragonwing." "Hello. Are you ready for a border patrol?" "Sure! Is anyone else coming with us?" He said and he stood up. "Nope. Lets go." "Aww..." and they took off towards the meadow.
"Wrong! Do it again!" Waveclaw snarled. "Your tail is swishing from side to side like a lopsided badger! What do you want, your opponent to kill you?" With a quick swipe, she brought Rushingpaw to the ground. "Get...up..." Waveclaw hissed through impatient teeth. "Please Waveclaw!" Rushingpaw begged. "I've been working all day without a piece of fresh kill or rest! Can't we work at Sundown?" "Sunhigh is the PERFECT TIME TO WORK." Barked Waveclaw. "And rests are for kits. IF YOU WANT TO BE THE BEST WARRIOR, DO AS I SAY!" Waveclaw barked and roared. Rushingpaw flinched. 'Gol-lee... I'll have to talk to Wolfstar about this rude trained mentor!' He spoke to himself.
( sure, just put it in the rp) "hey, get up, it's time for your apprentice test." wolfstar shouted intothe apprentice den. they all filed out quietly: speedpaw loudpaw rosepaw mistpaw stormpaw ghostpaw rushingpaw "your mentors will be watching you, so bring back as much prey as possible." i growled. "go." they scattered into the forest.
Rushingpaw felt butterflies in his stomach. Waveclaw would be watching. Not good. He could just imagine her snarled up face every time he missed a piece of prey. 'That won't happen!' he thought. He quickly and quietly brought down a crow and felt Waveclaw's warm gaze on him.
I gazed warmly at the apprentices, never having my own warrior ceremony. I was named Spottedflame at birth, but changed it to Spottedfire because it sounded better. Wolfstar showed no emotion as she called up the first apprentice , Loudpaw. I held my breath, waiting to hear his warrior name....
"do all of you promise to uphold and keep to the code?" i asked, deathly bored. "yes." they all said in unison. "loudpaw, you will now be known as loudsea. rushingpaw, u will be known as rushingcreek. speedpaw; speedfoot. stormpaw, you will now be known as stormheart. rosepaw is now rosebreeze. and..." i hesitated for the last two. i decided i would name them to associate with their... secret. "mistpaw will now be known as mistsoul, and her brother ghostpaw will now be known as ghostspirit." and their secret was that they were reincarnated. they were already dead.
THAT'S THEIR SECRET!?!? WHAT IN THE NAME OF BACON?!?! I thought it would be epic, like they were the children of Tigerstar, or Hawkfrost, or a medicine cat, or something cool like that. THIS IS AWESOME! GHOST CATS! Not Starclan, BUT GHOST CATS!! I love it!
Loudpaw was jumping around happily. "I'm not really tired yet!!"
ReplyDelete"I can see that." Rushingpaw added.
Speedpaw asked, "Why so hyper?"
"I just really want to train tomorrow!!!"
"I guess that makes sense.." Rushingpaw said. "Well, im going to sleep." She curled up and closed her eyes.
Loudpaw stayed up and started to play with a leaf that was on the ground. Speedpaw enjoyed watching him try to "Kill" the leaf. They shared a couple of laughs, some were too loud, so they pretended to sleep if a warrior walked in. But once they left, the two went back to their game.
rushing is a tom and speed is a she cat!! <>< sorry if i go u confussed!!
ReplyDelete(Ha, Sorry.)
ReplyDeleteRushingpaw woke up to find his sister sleeping next to Loudpaw, with a ripped up leaf beside them.
"Hmph."
He walked out of the den quietly and grabbed a mouse to eat. He wondered what he was going to learn today.
(Waveclaw, Featherheart, od Dragonwing, you can write about your apprentices here!!)
ReplyDelete-I know's it's awkward because on the Cats of hiddenclan page it says WaveKIT but it's for my story, so I think I'll just stay a warrior here and on my story just be a kit. So the story is completely different :)-
ReplyDelete"Rushingpaw... GET OUT HERE NOW!" Waveclaw growled with dignity.
Rushingpaw sighed and felt Mistpaw's eyes on him. He turned around and saw her staring at him. Uncomfortable, Rushingpaw quickly sprang out. Waveclaw was a fierce and impatient mentor, somewhat good for him, though.
"Good Morning Waveclaw." he recited. He looked around. No other apprentice was up this early saying 'goody goody morning' to THEIR mentor.
Waveclaw inspected him.
"Go pick out the elders' fleas till sunhigh." She barked at him. "I'll inspect them, so don't dare skip one. Then meet me in the training hollow SHARP when the sun gets between those two trees." Waveclaw said, gesturing to the tall trees in the front of camp.
"yes, Waveclaw." Rushingpaw said orderly, and ran off.
Rushingpaw ran to the elder's den and started to pick fleas. At sunhigh Waveclaw came in, as planned, and inspected.
ReplyDelete"Very good Rushingpaww, now we are going to the training hollow," Waveclaw said sternly.
The elders stared after Rushinigpaw in sympathy, seeing that he was never getting a break. But they didn't say anything because they didn't want to get Waveclaw angry.
-Oceanmist (is this ok, srry this is my first post and I dont know that much about hiddenclan yet)
-Oh yeah, thats fine :) -
ReplyDeleteLoudpaw watched Rushingpaw get so hardly worked. He sighed and took another bite of his vole until Dragonwing came over.
"Hi, Dragonwing."
"Hello. Are you ready for a border patrol?"
"Sure! Is anyone else coming with us?" He said and he stood up.
"Nope. Lets go."
"Aww..." and they took off towards the meadow.
"Wrong! Do it again!" Waveclaw snarled. "Your tail is swishing from side to side like a lopsided badger! What do you want, your opponent to kill you?"
ReplyDeleteWith a quick swipe, she brought Rushingpaw to the ground.
"Get...up..." Waveclaw hissed through impatient teeth.
"Please Waveclaw!" Rushingpaw begged. "I've been working all day without a piece of fresh kill or rest! Can't we work at Sundown?"
"Sunhigh is the PERFECT TIME TO WORK." Barked Waveclaw. "And rests are for kits. IF YOU WANT TO BE THE BEST WARRIOR, DO AS I SAY!" Waveclaw barked and roared.
Rushingpaw flinched. 'Gol-lee... I'll have to talk to Wolfstar about this rude trained mentor!' He spoke to himself.
*hey umm i was wondering if speedpaw and loudpaw could be mates*
ReplyDelete( sure, just put it in the rp)
ReplyDelete"hey, get up, it's time for your apprentice test." wolfstar shouted intothe apprentice den. they all filed out quietly:
speedpaw
loudpaw
rosepaw
mistpaw
stormpaw
ghostpaw
rushingpaw
"your mentors will be watching you, so bring back as much prey as possible." i growled. "go."
they scattered into the forest.
-wolfstar/wolfshadow
Rushingpaw felt butterflies in his stomach. Waveclaw would be watching. Not good. He could just imagine her snarled up face every time he missed a piece of prey.
ReplyDelete'That won't happen!' he thought. He quickly and quietly brought down a crow and felt Waveclaw's warm gaze on him.
I gazed warmly at the apprentices, never having my own warrior ceremony. I was named Spottedflame at birth, but changed it to Spottedfire because it sounded better. Wolfstar showed no emotion as she called up the first apprentice , Loudpaw. I held my breath, waiting to hear his warrior name....
ReplyDeleteSpottedfire
"do all of you promise to uphold and keep to the code?" i asked, deathly bored.
ReplyDelete"yes." they all said in unison.
"loudpaw, you will now be known as loudsea. rushingpaw, u will be known as rushingcreek. speedpaw; speedfoot. stormpaw, you will now be known as stormheart. rosepaw is now rosebreeze. and..." i hesitated for the last two. i decided i would name them to associate with their... secret.
"mistpaw will now be known as mistsoul, and her brother ghostpaw will now be known as ghostspirit."
and their secret was that they were reincarnated. they were already dead.
-wolfstar
O.O
ReplyDeleteTHAT'S THEIR SECRET!?!? WHAT IN THE NAME OF BACON?!?! I thought it would be epic, like they were the children of Tigerstar, or Hawkfrost, or a medicine cat, or something cool like that. THIS IS AWESOME! GHOST CATS! Not Starclan, BUT GHOST CATS!! I love it!
Spottedfire
Spottedfire luvs it.
No one has posted on here for a month. : (
ReplyDeleteI never expected their secret to be like THAT.
ReplyDeleteWillowfoot is shocked.